GRE AWA writing template

This argument relies on unverified assumptions and has a very extreme conclusion. The author fails to make logical connections between the evidence provided and the conclusion that ................

This alone does not constitute a logical argument in favor of.., and it certainly does not provide support or proof of the main argument..

First, the argument assumes that ........... 
This statement is extreme because it infers every .. could be ranked by......
There are many... 
The author should clarify this statement by ...

The argument fails to provide any justification that....

More significantly, the argument states that ....

So even if we assume that ..., the argument is still lacking because it does not provide information to show that ...

the argument does not address the cause of problem, so...
The argument also does not address what would happen in the event that ....

Second, the arguemnt states that... 
While this statement might be true..., it is certainly not true .... 
The argument also leaves many other unanswered questions.
Even if ..., they are not necessarily likely to .... 

Finally the argument claims that ...
The conclusion states that ...,... 
The author doesn't give any indication.. 




In conclusion, the argument is flawed and therefore unconvincing.
The addition of  examples would prove to strength the argument.